Funeral eulogy for mother?

i have to wrie a eulogy for my mother i have made a draft and i would like some feedback thank you for your input my family would like to thank you for attending this service for my mother, she had a strong passion for her hobbies knitting crochet and tapestry,most people would stop and admire her acheivement taking shape,my mother enjoyed entering them in competions,i will miss the fun times we shared,you were always there for me through ther good time and the tough times, i enjoyed your company and support for my lawn bowling pursuits you were always watching,your loving memory will be in my heart forever and i know you will be watching over me love you mum